Live Edit: Do not bury your theme

Join Drake and Marie as they edit a brave soul's submission to the podcast! They discuss the importance of the opening line, when strong verbs are too strong and the importance of setting the scene.  <br/><br/>Give us feedback at releasingyourinnerdragon(at)gmail(dot)com<br/><br/>Magicfall: http://magicfallnovel.com/<br/><br/>Drake's Contact Details:<br/>Starving Writer Studio: https://www.starvingwriterstudio.com/<br/>Drake-U: https://class.drakeu.com/  - Use RYID25 for 25% off!<br/><br/>Marie's contact details:<br/>Books: https://mariemullany.com/work<br/>Just In Time Worlds: https://www.youtube.com/c/Just....InTimeWorlds?sub_con